Monday, October 1, 2012

review feedback

         After i finish reading the feedback from my group, i think will go the following steps. First, i should keep writing 3 more pages so that i will have 5 page letter. second, try to fix the problems that i have in my letter, which i have found a lot in my first two pages letter. third, i think i should have go find some other information that can help me with my evidence. finally the last, after i finish the 5pages letter i will reread my letter so that i wouldn't mistype any words or missing some words in the sentences.
         i think I'm in a good shape because i know what i should write in my other 3 pages of letter; i know where to find my information or how to put it into the letter.

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